Blue
Time going by, by, by
Wanting snow, snow, snow
Hopes so high, high, high
Sky so low, low, low
Blue in light fading
Ice and snow
Ice and snow
Time going by, by, by
Wanting snow, snow, snow
Hopes so high, high, high
Sky so low, low, low
Blue in light fading
Ice and snow
Ice and snow
Nicely done! I like the repitition. I also like the rhyme of the long "i". Ties the poem together quite well.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem, too! I liked the line, "Blue in light fading." I don't know what it means, but it sounds nice. I like poems where I don't understand the whole thing but I can tell that every line has some kind of meaning.
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