Sunday, August 1, 2010

Coffee Coolatta

Thump
Thump
Thump
Thump
Veins and arteries in my brain pulse hard
I know
That i probably shouldnt have had
That coffee coolatta
And now
The headache pulses strongly
And
CRACK
Another pain
Until the caffenated rush
And ache
Goes numb
Something random i put in poem form because i drank 2 much coffee n got a really bad headache...do you like it?

1 comment:

  1. I like it. Nice rhyme and repitition. Nice showing of what a headache feels like.

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