Saturday, July 17, 2010

Assignment

Frosted shadows in
Perfect circles
And crystalline
Mercedes Benz road
Fragmented moonlight
And asphalt
On
Jockeys drive
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2 comments:

  1. WendyJuly 21, 2010 at 8:49 AM

    Here, you've chosen to emphasize the word "on" by itself, making me feel I'm actually ON that road (Mercedes Benz road). Bravo!

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  2. WackaJessieJuly 21, 2010 at 9:52 AM

    yeah, good job!

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