Saturday, July 17, 2010

Assignment


Assignment


Frost shadows
Perfect circles crystalline
Mercedes Benz
Road fragmented
Moonlight and asphalt
Jockeys drive

2 comments:

  1. This is also a very visual poem with the "perfect circles crystalline" in juxtapostition and contrast to the "road fragmented". Also a very nice job!

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  2. good emphasise. clear cut and visual.

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