A writing group from the Mark and Emily Turner Library in Presque Isle, Maine.
The word "Drive" set by itself at the very end of the poem draw the whole poem's focus to that word. It's very visual. Nice job!
I like your use of spaceing as well as drawing the focus to road fragmented and drive. somehow it just works!!!!!
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The word "Drive" set by itself at the very end of the poem draw the whole poem's focus to that word. It's very visual. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI like your use of spaceing as well as drawing the focus to road fragmented and drive. somehow it just works!!!!!
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