Invisible
I sit in a crowded room
Smothered by the voices
I wish there was a way
To drown out all the noises
I imagine I can disappear
That I can fade away
The hard bright light from the sun that gives no warmth
Will not find me today
The color in my fingers
Scares and starts to flee
Soon I will be gone
Then no one will see me
Their loud voices will not find me there
Once I'm in that transparent land
My fingers are completely gone
Now so are my hands
Nobody will notice
As my body disappears
Their voices just keep talking
Soon I will not hear
Now I am completely gone
My feet can't feel the ground
Nobody will hear me
I do not make a sound
Now I am invisible
I sit in a crowded room
Smothered by the voices
I wish there was a way
To drown out all the noises
I imagine I can disappear
That I can fade away
The hard bright light from the sun that gives no warmth
Will not find me today
The color in my fingers
Scares and starts to flee
Soon I will be gone
Then no one will see me
Their loud voices will not find me there
Once I'm in that transparent land
My fingers are completely gone
Now so are my hands
Nobody will notice
As my body disappears
Their voices just keep talking
Soon I will not hear
Now I am completely gone
My feet can't feel the ground
Nobody will hear me
I do not make a sound
Now I am invisible
I've already heard this poem, because you read it to me when you wrote it. I love it! Good job!
ReplyDeleteReally, really nice!
ReplyDeleteI agree! just a note: u used a few excess words that you probably don't need. also, think: how many ways can you say invisible? it might spice up your writting instead of saying invisible three our four times in that lovely writeing peace.... by the way, please excuss my spelling. I know I suck.
ReplyDeleteThat was so cool! You have talent. I can't write poetry.
ReplyDelete(P.S. Nice spelling, Jess. You rock.)