I loved that poem! I can't stop laughing out loud whenever I read it. But as Bianca said, why did you change bumbershoot to umbrella? And what is the correct spelling for bumbershoot?
I think we all voted hands down for bumbershoot to come back. just remember this is YOUR poem, so whatever you want no matter how wacky, is how it should be.
what about the bumbershoot? (or watever that word was that meant umbrella haha)
ReplyDeleteI loved that poem! I can't stop laughing out loud whenever I read it. But as Bianca said, why did you change bumbershoot to umbrella? And what is the correct spelling for bumbershoot?
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome. But I agree, what happened to the bumbershoot?!
ReplyDeletei think bumber shoot is better cuz when i hear the word bumber shoot it makes the poem that much better n i laugh....again haha
ReplyDeleteI think we all voted hands down for bumbershoot to come back. just remember this is YOUR poem, so whatever you want no matter how wacky, is how it should be.
ReplyDeleteBUMBERSHOOT! lol;D
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