Friday, July 16, 2010

Squirrel

(from the Thursday meeting)


Squirrel.
He held his umbrella high.
Blubbery narwhals squeegee wet noodles from the pavement.

He walks away.

6 comments:

  1. what about the bumbershoot? (or watever that word was that meant umbrella haha)

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  2. I loved that poem! I can't stop laughing out loud whenever I read it. But as Bianca said, why did you change bumbershoot to umbrella? And what is the correct spelling for bumbershoot?

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  3. This is awesome. But I agree, what happened to the bumbershoot?!

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  4. i think bumber shoot is better cuz when i hear the word bumber shoot it makes the poem that much better n i laugh....again haha

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  5. I think we all voted hands down for bumbershoot to come back. just remember this is YOUR poem, so whatever you want no matter how wacky, is how it should be.

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