Hello!
I just wanted to recap what the poetry prompt was for today: Rewrite the following poem emphasizing what YOU feel is important. Remember, the strongest power place is at the end of a line. The second strongest is at the beginning. Some words need to stand alone for maximum power, and some need to be broken between two lines. Also, use rhyme and near rhyme to strengthen the middle of long lines.
Here's the original words without any line breaks:
Frost shadows perfect circles crystalline Mercedes Benz road fragmented moonlight and asphalt jockeys drive
You can change tenses and add minor words (to, the, and, so, a), but you can't change or add any other words.
You have until next Thursday to do this. Post your poems here.
To add info to your bio, go to New Post, then Edit Pages. Pick your page and make any additions or changes you want.
Does anyone have a really great picture of a squirrel for our header?
-Wendy
I have a picture of a squirrel that we could use. Here it is:
ReplyDeletehttp://whoisshmira.files.wordpress.com/2008/10/squirrel4.jpg