Drip
Drop
Crackle
Pop
Rain falling down
Plip
Plop
Patter
Slop
All on the ground
Drip drip drip
DROP
Crackle crackle crackle
POP
Plip plop
Patter slop
A thunderstorms around
Flash flash
Boom crash
Lightning lightning
THUNDER
Smash smash
Rooms trashed
From dangerous winds and
Others
Clouds part
Sun starts
To peek and say
Hello
But clouds as a cart
Contain its heart
Should it stay
Or should it go?
YAY! Love this!
ReplyDeletecute! sounds like a children's song. have you ever tried stanzas? you can use spaceing to emphasize and give the reader time to enjoy your poem as they go through it. it's a pretty big piece don't ya think?
ReplyDeletewell i could have shortened it up but then it wouldnt have had emphasis on some of the words like i wanted i think its more fun to read it the way it is :)
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